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a
death ahead 
and planet
turning 
I've
brought my bones with me 
I must be
some kind of cloud covered peak 
I have an
eye for up 
as well 
watch for
the rumoured blue 
the image
in me 
and was
you see 
the demon
of analogy 
was last
laid to rest 
where is
the candle daylight leftover?
is there
saying goodbye 
when I'm
really a part 
really
here 
?
can't even
remember 
who it is
that's gone 
I'll be
the loose end tied 
so that
the weave is firm 
 
Very moving, Kit. Last two lines especially.
ReplyDeleteOh that ending, and the rumoured blue!
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