Saturday, July 16, 2016

Rob Schackne #16 - Peach Blossom Spring

Peach Blossom Spring


Big waves crash 
on a frigid beach
far from my warm cottage

How did you dare
wade into the water
in just your underwear?

Cold time stretched
winter moved to one side
I get up and walk to the garden

Living in China
how do I dare write a poem 
called Peach Blossom Spring?

I hear Eliot
when I write the word peach
and imagine his trousers rolled

Pink blossoms fell
beneath the old peach trees
remembering spring

Under the roses
I find a shell and a bone
listening together to the sea

At my desk 
I take a brush 
and lightly dust.

2 comments:

  1. Great poem, Rob. Love the Eliot reference and the combination of Eastern and Western allusions. Like so many, Prufrock hooked me as a reader of poetry in my teens.

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  2. Wonderful!! Each stanza, a gem, a standalone gem.

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