Give me Fever.
stitched onto the sand you were once a fever
of stinging rays wide underwater
kites
with graceful flapping wings apparitions beamed from
outer space it always seemed to me the end of all the
mysteries my uncles cousins picking stick thin legs
between the sand bar and lagoon Narooma
beach
afraid of
electricity surely coursing
through the
long whip tails devil-barbed you swished you swished
patrolling more sure than all the storm troopers in the
Death Star now to open up the paper on a Saturday
find the stingray killing competition see you there
all dead in a patterned grid speaks of no
imagination barbarous-engined zombies wound up set loose
human Pac men stealing grace
and all imagination
nothing left but rot and someone coming by
to turn the sand across a glut of bodies
Sunday if not Monday
eh.
see you there
ReplyDeleteall dead in a patterned grid
but I read
see you there
all dead in a patterned grief
there's so much happening here
it's like ten poems in one
but I want to meet the civilised zombies
- the ones who've given up on the machine
I think there is more in this Narooma cycle Kit, oh I may pinch your suggestion btw is that ok?
DeleteThe civilised Zombies I think I have written them already. I decided to post it and not stew on it. It is part of the Cosy Camp cycle. Goodness, how things come at you from strange directions, don't they?
I love this poem but I wanted it to end with the word 'bodies'
ReplyDeleteyou could well be right.
DeleteI agree with Claine! I thought it was to bad not to end with the bodies! But thanks for this poem and the images and the complete change of scenery ( I'm bang in the middle of rural Tennessee at the moment!) and the reflexion about what's at stake here. (And stingrays are so marvelous creatures!)
ReplyDeleteMy dears I have changed it as I think I noodled off.....
DeleteNo. Sunday/Monday etc goes very well at the very start, dear Kerri. :)
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