I saw the bulletheaded blacks
go in acrobatic formation
against the pale rain curtain
drawn across the further hill
and heard the cry
sharp as stick breaks
sharp as beaks
go right through like a sword can
through a magic cabinet
leaving everyone exhilarated
but intact
and then the rain followed
like applause
Perfect. Love the fresh description of the sound they make. Just wonderful.
ReplyDeleteapplause for the poem too!
ReplyDeletelike a great video short, vivid
ReplyDeleteExcellent work.
ReplyDeleteshort, sharp fantastic, Mikaela!
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