sun sees
the green leaves'
great escape
the fall
from tree
to freedom
hard earth
and soaking rains
ahead
for now
this last
flight's fancy
the green leaves'
great escape
the fall
from tree
to freedom
hard earth
and soaking rains
ahead
for now
this last
flight's fancy
Nice villenelle Chrys, each stanza with a vivid image. I'm not that keen on the last line, "flight's fancy", that alliteration. But I'm not sure what you'd replace it with.
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