Wednesday, September 7, 2016

Danny Gentile #37 - Skin Stretched


Skin Stretched


The apostrophe
floats a balloon
across the action

the word requires
an intervention
so it stages one

if I could lift a snake so easily
from the jaws of meaning
it would become

if I could breathe helium
into a balloon
I would be life of the party

more than alien
and snake-charmer
extraordinaire

I wait for the word
to drop its fallacy
and leave the room

I wait for the snake
to see-out the constituents
surrounding it

No balloon succumbs
with a grace-note
rather a hiss or bang

the snake is accepting
and that is why
it slides from here

twisting through
the sentence it waits
in the long yard

for the party
to be over.

5 comments:

  1. Really enjoyed this poem, Danny. Reminded me a little of Emily Dickinson. The way you have captured the character of language is truly enviable.

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  2. Yeah, and the way you circle back to 'hiss or a bang' is nice. Thanks!

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  3. This one snaked my loo then came back, bit me right on my arse! Lovely, and the violent capability I have come to expect from you in form. Smasher.

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  4. I really like the balloon/snake. Great stuff.

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  5. Great imagery and movement. Thanks! So many layers.

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