Thursday, May 11, 2017

Rob Schackne #329 - The Precession of Simulacra: WTF

The Precession of Simulacra: WTF
                       
                       Inside my empty bottle
                       I was constructing a lighthouse
                       while all the others were making ships.

                              Charles Simic


Well hell I was a little different
while the others were making trains
I was trying to make a spaceship
theirs made it out of the station
mine just looked empty there
screw it I thought give me visions
time spreads wider with the will
plans cardinal points and principles
please get us out of this world alive
it needs more than a goddamn train
sure I'm slightly different now
ah but dreams are about the same
a bit closer to a lighthouse than a rocket

9 comments:

  1. I love that, what else can be said, just perfect to me, from out of the lens

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  2. this looks good for the sci-fi poetry anthology

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    1. Ha. I know the one. It's called "TAKING UP SPACE".

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  3. Fabulous Rob - word perfect & picture/image perfect too :))

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  4. So succinctly poured... with no spilt drops. Wonderful.

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