They told her
if she told the boy that the world had made dark
the same thing fifteen times over
that there should be no fear
of stabbings
but the room dripped with blood
and she went home voiceless
This ghetto had too many rooms
too much space
too many dark corners
for poverty to hide within
None answered
the slow students
with no home
where no mothers huddled
and where there were
no lampshades or teapots
to speak of
Afterwards
the teacher returned home
to become a shadow
in her apartment
against the aging carpet
where she could not pay her rent
Don't know whether to say Wow or Woah - either way Voiceless really packs a punch - the room dripping with blood, going home voiceless, no lampshades or teapots, aging carpet, shadow 'play'. Powerful stuff Claine :)
ReplyDeleteThe poem is based on a very disturbing experience I had that day! I had to write it out!
Deleteand the girl made of light
ReplyDeletecome floating by
never a word
said she
and the boy of light was filled with laughter!
DeleteAlways so good Claine, poignant, stunning in all the ways
ReplyDeleteThanks James
DeleteBrutal final stanza
ReplyDeleteThanks Stuart. The brutality of what I write about has alienated a fair few readers though!
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ReplyDeletethe voice looks for rent
instead finds a tear
the offside of the heart
Offside x
DeleteAïe aïe aïe as we say in French when it hurts ...! powerfull "description" Claine! it leaves me breathless.
ReplyDeleteThanks Beatrice. I was on the brink when I wrote it. I had to digest a lot of trauma!
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