blanched almonds
poured milk
iris petals took on the colour
of the ivory paper
the colour of condensed milk
but demanded to be white
lines that described them
couldn't render them white enough
background darkness
didn’t make them white
cancelled the effect of the lines
so it had to be
white paint on white
like whitewashing
white walls
defeating the purpose of
making drawings
with bamboo pen
on khadi paper
it wasn’t meant to be a painting

I really enjoyed this.
ReplyDeleteso descriptive of the struggle and such a pleasing image
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