Sunday, March 13, 2016

Susan Hawthorne #73 rain bird

rain stalks the waves
picking up wind
as it strides across the sea

a cricket calls
a single bird note signalling

the sea is ruffled
air shifts and lifts


it rains



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2 comments:

  1. Efi HatzimanolisMarch 13, 2016 at 8:45 PM

    great tension, even in its arrival!

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  2. Susan HawthorneMarch 14, 2016 at 12:48 AM

    It was extraordinary to watch the rain progress across the sea and all the reverberations happening around me.

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