Sunday, April 17, 2016

Sarah St Vincent Welch #108 Set





their eyes
their hands open
to you

right right right
left left left
to your partner
they to you
that's all it is

lips half smile
flush at neck

right right right
left left left
not touching

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5 comments:

  1. UnknownApril 18, 2016 at 12:52 AM

    perfect

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  2. Efi HatzimanolisApril 18, 2016 at 11:48 AM

    yes, perfect... the last two stanzas carry and pace the erotic force of the dancing so perfectly...i can't imagine any other way of writing it!

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  3. jeltjeApril 18, 2016 at 1:43 PM

    this is becoming quite a sequence! looking forward to th next one, already!

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  4. Sarah St Vincent WelchApril 19, 2016 at 11:44 AM

    Thank you!

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  5. Lizz Murphy PoetApril 22, 2016 at 9:35 AM

    Erotic force indeed Efi. Simple sweet sexy - love it.

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