… and then I
thought the park wind said:
when I was 22
(but not for
long)
I passed over
school
playgrounds
of long empty
silences and
slippery-dips and
monkey bars,
and adults who
still remembered the school,
often in a state
of inebriated velleity.
I could not put
their ferrous music into my words,
nor the smell of
wet tubular steel
and tanbark and blood in the mouth,
nor the stolen
sky,
the flashing
blood and tawny port,
the sudden bright
blast of the siren
the shattering of
flagon glass into constellations and the
devilish
bevelling of the self, through sleeping rough
in the old school
grounds,
just the
universal aching
…
and then it dropped again.
A chill wind a sad wind a strangely nostalgic wind ... amazing poem
ReplyDeletewet tubular steel and tanbark and blood in the mouth... So evocative. A lovely poem
ReplyDeleteThanks Lizz, Mikaela,and Melinda — I'm blown away myself, I just wrote it this morning and had no idea of the response it would get!
ReplyDeleteIt's lovely the way you combine those disparate things and school yards are so strange when they're empty
ReplyDeleteI felt myself there, wonderful
ReplyDeleteI shall frame these wonderful compliments, thank you all. :)
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