Saturday, April 23, 2016

Robert Verdon, #120, The Sky is Low


… and then I thought the park wind said:
when I was 22
(but not for long)
I passed over
school playgrounds
of long empty silences and
slippery-dips and monkey bars,
and adults who still remembered the school,
often in a state of inebriated velleity.
I could not put their ferrous music into my words,
nor the smell of
wet tubular steel and tanbark and blood in the mouth,
nor the stolen sky,
the flashing blood and tawny port,
the sudden bright blast of the siren
the shattering of flagon glass into constellations and the
devilish bevelling of the self, through sleeping rough
in the old school grounds,
just the universal aching
… and then it dropped again.

6 comments:

  1. A chill wind a sad wind a strangely nostalgic wind ... amazing poem

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  2. wet tubular steel and tanbark and blood in the mouth... So evocative. A lovely poem

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  3. Thanks Lizz, Mikaela,and Melinda — I'm blown away myself, I just wrote it this morning and had no idea of the response it would get!

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  4. It's lovely the way you combine those disparate things and school yards are so strange when they're empty

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  5. I shall frame these wonderful compliments, thank you all. :)

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