Friday, July 1, 2016

Nathanael O'Reilly #1 Exploring the Neighborhood



Exploring the Neighborhood After Ten Days

Confined at Home Due to Surgery




Three flags fly above the Baptist church

ready for July 4th the sign proclaims

THIS SUNDAY: PATRIOTIC SERMON



a new girl named Tatiana rings up

my salt and vinegar chips and six-pack

of IPA at Brookshire’s supermarket



my favorite neighbor has traded in

his Land Rover for a Suburban

losing his hint of European cool



three more houses are for sale

or lease and Matt across the street

has just mown and edged his lawn



the woman with pink personalized

license plates proclaiming OIL WFE

is moving out leaving trash behind



the basketball courts, baseball fields

and playground are all deserted

the kids trapped indoors by the heat



Old Ray on Olympic watches the street

on a plastic chair in his open garage

Katie panting faithfully alongside



empty recycling bins lie helpless

on their sides waiting for fathers

to come home and carry them inside









2 comments:

  1. Wonderful snapshots of your neighbourhood, Nathanael. I really enjoyed the many understated perspectives on suburban masculinity here. Really nice work.

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  2. Thanks, Efi. I wasn't trying to say much about masculinity, apart from the traditional gender roles in the last stanza, but now that you mention it I can see the theme running through the poem. Just one of the reasons why it's great to have intelligent readers!

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