My
Primordial Ooze
I am the washing on the outside line
blazing out the sun stripe
white
fly delightfully every time the lightest kind of air
takes a run
up here the porch line holds the socks
holds the underwear takes the overflow
of what I think I’ll need if the weather doesn’t
hold, if this reverie can’t hold
me and today
let me think of it
some new way
I dont think the title matched the lovely image of the the washing i can just see the hints of other meaning peeping out its a very uplifting piece for me so hopefully I haven't just missed the whole point.
ReplyDeleteYes, it is part of a series, so you didn't miss the point, I will take that on board and put it into the notes on this one. I have a series of self-creation poems going, but of course it is no good if the reader doesn't know it!! Thanks you.
DeleteI love it all, Kerri, kit and kaboodle!
ReplyDeleteOh those images work beautifully, binding the thoughts, love it!
ReplyDeletehung out to dry yet again
ReplyDeleteEvery day Kit, I start off, wet as a puddle on the ground.
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