A summer morning in Indonesia
our blankets were piled
messy, pillows were wet
from my drooling, overnight
salivating painted marks,
a geographical shape of my island
or your country maybe?
the stench whiffed, a morning aroma
soaring along the cockcrows
loud and rowdy, who made the rooster
a conch blower announcing a new war
a new day with rats thumping, walloping
on my roof like army marching out
to battle buzzing wasps
or hornets, one of those
insects loitering and nesting
in my loft, a warfare
below us, some eggs were fried
I could hear the sizzling oil
from the neighboring house
I could smell the grease
shiny surface, sunny side
eggs and their crisp edges
steamed rice standing, ready
warm, just out of the steamer
through the wall, I smelled them
sunrays sliding through my curtains
yellow gleams from the outside
yellower sparks next to me
I realized that morning
summer had made your blonde hair
even lighter
this has a lovely oblique way of describing the other person
ReplyDeletelove the description of the house, too... not easy to get used to, I'd say!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jeltje
Deleteexotic from my french environement! but I love it!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Beatrice!
DeleteThis was such a lovely moving alive poem to read this morning, Chrys, I have just returned to iy and enjoyed it again.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sarah!
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