Thursday, August 18, 2016

Robert Verdon #272, Outsider


the family picnicked on a blanket by the wattles
the wattles grew at the edge of the greasy lake
the crow flew over the surface, its reflection quivering beneath
the cloud stretched overhead in glass beams
clocksprings and chimes were other birds
networks of piping connected all sounds as though they were water
there were dunes of water in the crow distance
a cascade of raw sun sizzled like molten solder as it hit the water
the crow dropped to the water like a seagull, coughing
no one cared but the child who watched
when they unpacked the boot later they found a tiger snake dead in the blanket

3 comments:

  1. Gosh that last line. It's like an incantation, this poem. Lovely. No one cared but the child who watched.

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  2. thanks Efi, Mikaela, Sarah — and to Cui Yuwei who translated it into Chinese. I was trying to write something better than what I felt were my desultory efforts recently (have had a bit of a lurgy).

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