in the
metal frame a snow gum
the limestone
plain's aqua sky
beside the
window an abstract
its surface
calls, how light falls
pale colour
glows
drawing in
the room
sliding
door opens
the steps
enter
the asphalt
road
the path
round the corner
cracked
ground
the snow
gums white bark
framed by metal and aqua sky
framed by metal and aqua sky
lovely, lovely :) I'm moving around, and round with your poetic directions
ReplyDeletebeautiful ... just love the 'the steps enter'
ReplyDeletesuch theatre.
It was inspired by the M16 attraction talk, Jeff. :)
ReplyDeleteabstraction talk :) I feel a Silk on the Road poem brewing, but it might take awhile.
ReplyDeletefantastic! love it
ReplyDeleteYour poems are worlds of their own.
ReplyDeleteThanks!
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