Thursday, June 16, 2016

Efi Hatzimanolis #132 Unpicked II: Rapunzel



Hanging 
in a garden free of metaphors,
uncombed and undyed,
yet he found me.
I told him
to get knotted,
when first he tried climbing,
then parting my curtain.
He wouldn’t listen. Put his arms around me.
Whispered, how long have you been here? 
I don’t know your name. The birds don’t know your name.

Because
I’m a tree fern,
and because that’s my skirt, not my hair, 
to which he's clinging like a toddler,
I don’t answer.

But
he has feelings 
that have been awakened by my silence,
so he persists in shredding
his soft skin
all over me.

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    1. oh yes, absolutely, Robbie! It was longer, more 'riddling' and heading into darker territory (ala Angela Carter at her heaviest) when I thought I better pull it back a bit.

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  2. I can feel the texture of this.

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  3. that prince is going to get a nasty surprise between this one and Emma's

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  4. Thank you, everyone for your comments!

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