Wednesday, June 1, 2016

P.S. Cottier #1 'The crowd was famish'd by degrees...'


‘The crowd was famish'd by degrees…’
(After Byron’s ‘Darkness’ 1816)

He wrote a world too cold for life
in that year without a summer,
rendered dark by a far volcanic burp,
spreading ash into the clouds,
although none then knew the reason.
The sun never showed itself,
modest as his widow in black,
but stripped of her cloak of beauty.
Weird weather lashed the lake
and stranger creatures emerged;
drinking blood, or created from electricity
and the raw discards of the dead,
a revenant of pure science,
enlivened by that other Shelley.

And now we sit in a smelted world,
and see the crowds famish’d by degrees;
the crops of dust, the skies pelting ice,
or obstinately dry. Look on your works,
the land must say, as some drown in
sudden lakes of rich excess.
The whole world rendered monstrous
by our restless experimentation.
Ah George, would that it were
one volcano, one more brief
year without a summer, as we ask
who made this colossal wreck?
and hold cracked mirrors to ourselves.

P.S. Cottier


Poet’s note: ‘colossal wreck’ is from Percy Bysshe Shelley’s ‘Ozymandias’.  The title quotation is from Byron’s ‘Darkness’.  The full poem can be read here.

I finished this one very early today, and thought it would make for a cheery start at this blog.

8 comments:

  1. An appropriate transformation!

    ReplyDelete
  2. Look on our works and despair, indeed! (Gosh, was Byron prescient or what?)

    ReplyDelete
  3. Today's 'restless experimentation' is not the problem, but the system that shapes it, and the tiny minority it is designed to benefit.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Reckless might be appropriate.

      Delete
    2. Penelope, 'smelted world' burned into my heart.

      Delete
    3. I was playing around with smeltered for a while, but as smelted contains melted with only a snaky s at the start, it seemed better.

      I think it's good I burned your heart, Sarah, in this instance. Probably will be the most serious poem I post here.

      Delete
    4. Great to hear about your word choice decisions. My heart is always ready to be burned by poetry. :)

      Delete
  4. Thank you, Penelope - I love the Victorians too, but....well put, if only it were one volcano, one lost summer. The system has indeed broken the climate, and the oceans.

    ReplyDelete

Note: Only a member of this blog may post a comment.