Saturday, August 20, 2016

Rob Schackne #53 - 'things seem to"

"things seem to"


things seem to 
be collapsing
would you please
look around

lost my place
in the book
I’m reading
where was I

please look
behind me
and tell me if
it’s still raining

5 comments:

  1. This is one of those that makes me thankful for the respite of not having to read for long...but I still get it all,share the feeling. I love tight language Cheers, Rob.

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  2. Thanks for listening, Danny and Linda :)

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  3. there's so much movement in this: inside a book, inside the house, outside as well... I can almost see you!

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