Monday, June 20, 2016

Jill McKeowen #9 Mum's Teapot

Mum’s Teapot

It served us mornings and afternoons,
its “Empire” design made in England
to last, the aluminium globe
bearing a pattern of sashes draped   
as if for a coronation, or,
as I used to imagine,
my mother’s wedding reception in
the black-and-white velvet fifties.

The spout, like an open-beaked bird,
sang to her first sunny kitchen
in the new pink fibro sixties,
when American-allied house design
gave us the breakfast bar, and there
we sat through the purple seventies
slurping milky sugared tea
while Mum wrapped our lunch for school.

In thirteen houses over fifty years,
this teapot brewed the Billy Tea
that we grew out of when moving away
to travel the share-house eighties,
and later, bringing our kids to visit,
we added new names to the pot— 
the Twinings lot, the herbals, chai—
and the century turned an age.

My sister decided a new pot was needed:
smooth silver, cylindrical lines,
and Mum quite likes the affluence,
goes along with the times—no choice,
death teaches you that—but still
she insists on Billy Tea, needs  
old points of reference
when everything has changed.

The old pot sits in my kitchen, sound
as the day it embarked, but empty,
the silent spout reaching up
in balance for the Bakelite handle
generous enough for the sturdiest hand,
the tannin-dark interior
so deep you need a light to see
the decades encrusted there.


Definitely in early draft stage, and may stay there; it feels superficial, but I've learned from it that the point of some pieces is simply to practice.   

3 comments:

  1. So wonderfully Australian, rich with memory.

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  2. There's lots of really good stuff here. I wonder if, like some of the 'memoir' pieces I've posted recently, it really wants to be a prose account? It doesn't read as superficial, but if it feels that way to you, it may well be because there is so much more to tell that it's hard to condense it into one poem.

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  3. exactly my thinking Rosemary. A poem wants to go a bit more close up I think, so it could either be a much longer poem, or go into prose. Thank you both for the feedback.

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