Friday, June 3, 2016

Rachael Mead #3, The hike to Bridal Gap



The hike to Bridal Gap

We set out into a morning where everything smells of rain
and I can feel the weather gathering between my fingers.
It is a sweet walk across the pound and I am content as a bee
laden with pollen weaving drunk and heavy to the hive.

The earth pulls the heat from the soles of my boots
as we pass through country guarded by eucalypts,
native pine and mallee.  Kangaroos lean on elbows
to watch us pass.  Everything smells of sunwarm fur.

The path narrows, rocks tumble underfoot as we climb up
the blunt saw-edge of the Pound. Ti-tree closes in overhead.
And then we are out, the world falls away from our feet,
the air in the valley standing so straight and clean.

We drop our packs, deciding in the last of the light
to climb Dick Nob. I’m not kidding – it’s on the map.
We clamber our way up the rock wall folded neatly
into layers before us, each of holding one end of a smile.

Yucca leaves rattle and slither as we pass reminding us
there are some inhabitants here we do not wish to meet.
We scramble on all fours, bodies flexing into ancient positions, 
dimly remembered. Goats and crows watch from nearby walls.

We climb out of the shade to catch the light as it passes west.
At the summit there is ceremony.  Rocks added to the cairn,
faces lifted to the sun, the underwater chime of uncorked scotch.
Everything smells of camp smoke, saltbush and laughter.


8 comments:

  1. Wonderful! You took me with you all the way. And that last line is just perfect.

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    1. Thanks so much Rosemary. I'm absolutely loving your poems too and feeling inspired to attempt some form poetry.

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  2. I'm thinking this is Flinders Ranges and Wilpena Pound. A wonderful place. Love the poem too, especially the bee lines.

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    1. Spot on! I'm so lucky to have the Flinders in my backyard. (And thanks so much for the kind words)

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  3. Great journey. You captured something about climbing - the ancient positions, really enjoyed this, Rachael.

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  4. Lovely. I love the bee metaphor, and the "underwater chime of uncorked scotch".

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  5. how evocative, and beautifully paced. Another great shot!

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