Friday, June 3, 2016

Mikaela Castledine #155 Slaking

Drinking in water
I like it cold
even in winter the taste so clean so icy clear
deglazing my tongue
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2 comments:

  1. UnknownJune 4, 2016 at 10:34 AM

    Really captures the feeling and pleasure of icy water. Thank you.

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  2. Efi HatzimanolisJune 4, 2016 at 2:37 PM

    the sounds of slaking in your poem, so well constructed and concise. Lovely.

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