Sunday, June 19, 2016

Red Gail Hennessy #19


Red
This is not an Imagist poem after William Carlos Williams

 
in the supermarket aisle
the young man caresses
a ripe tomato which slips
from his hand and falls

 
for the seconds it takes

for him to decide whether
or not to return it to its pile,

 
I hold my breath

 
I remember
my young son proclaiming
a tomato is a fruit not a vegetable, and
his grandmother repeating more than twice
tomatoes belong on the kitchen sill
they keep their flavour there,
as if they had discovered
rules of classification, of storage

 
and when
the young man deliberately places
the lone tomato into his trolley

 
my moral compass steadies
so much had depended on a red tomato.

 

Gail Hennessy 2016.

 

11 comments:

  1. A lovely poem, Gail. The suspense is wonderful and I enjoyed the depth of the poem unfolding too. It's wonderful.

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  2. Memory, connection, the true riches of life. Beautiful.

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  3. No it's not; it's a suspenseful narrative with a powerful conclusion (and the allusion gives a whole new depth to the CWC phrase).

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  4. Thank you all for your great feedback. Much appreciated.

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  5. This is wonderful Gail, thank you!

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  6. I'm late for congratulating because in France, something like a 10 hour difference ... but YES!! I enjoyed reading this poem so much! welldone!

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