What a great opening poem, Linda. Frisson!
Yes. Shake it on out.
When I first read it quickly (and half-asleep earlier this morning) it seemed slight, but then I was impelled to read it again — wow! A great poem. Only one small carp — should it be dust 'motes'?
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What a great opening poem, Linda. Frisson!
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ReplyDeleteWhen I first read it quickly (and half-asleep earlier this morning) it seemed slight, but then I was impelled to read it again — wow! A great poem. Only one small carp — should it be dust 'motes'?
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