Incantation1
In the Beginning was
the Gospel of prayers to the Father for my father
the magic of alchemy’s force
the transubstantiation of bread
vintaged to blood. My grandmother
and I kneeling on the wooden pews
mine entrusted to the tongue of belief
please God, please God, please…
Gail Hennessy 2016.
This really has the quality and rhythm of an incantation. The rhythm sounds like the mass, and the words are so raw. It has the quality of a child at mass. Lovely.
ReplyDeletenice Gail. I like how you've used the language of the Mass, esp 'the transubstantiation of bread'. Great line. And there's something so desperate about 'morning Mass', echoed in the last line.
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