Friday, June 17, 2016

Mikaela Castledine #169 LittleThoughts

It’s not right
small green parrot cylindrical and blunt
lying breast up on the road

3 comments:

  1. Sad. Your vivid yet understated description creates great pathos.

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  2. Yes, I agree with Rosemary. It's lovely.

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  3. very sad - 'blunt' is so powerful a word here. This is wonderful.

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