Wednesday, June 8, 2016

Rosemary Nissen-Wade #9 Winter Sun haiku/senryu


Winter Sun haiku/senryu

winter sun
my cat stretches
one long paw

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winter sun
frangipani leaves
through the blind

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winter sun
thinking of a walk
I fall asleep
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6 comments:

  1. Myron LysenkoJune 8, 2016 at 11:06 PM

    Good to read these. The last one is my favourite.

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  2. Efi HatzimanolisJune 9, 2016 at 8:27 AM

    lovely - I agree.

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  3. UnknownJune 9, 2016 at 9:44 AM

    Lovely use of repetition, the winter sun is soporific in the very rhythm of the poems.

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  4. Rosemary Nissen-WadeJune 9, 2016 at 9:48 AM

    Thanks, guys. Great to get the feedback.

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  5. UnknownJune 9, 2016 at 1:47 PM

    so evocative

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  6. UnknownJune 9, 2016 at 6:37 PM

    I like the slow sensuous images here, the sense of a softer winter sun.

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