Monday, June 20, 2016

19.6.16 (#169) birthday haiku by Myron Lysenko

she sleeps in
on her birthday
parrot in sunshine


her family
making birthday cards
mid morning


nalysnyky
for brunch—
rainbow socks


outdoor table
our chickens gather around
the birthday girl


her lifelong friend—
she drives from the city
with cake


cold night—
the dog on his hind legs
eating cake


6 comments:

  1. There is such agreat feeling of happiness here, the birds and animals help create this atmosphere.

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    1. What a lovely thing to tell me. Thank you very much, Susan.

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  2. What Susan said. Also a beautiful evocation of family. I like the progression. (At first I thought it was a child's birthday; but the 5th reveals, quite the opposite – which is all the nicer.)

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    1. I love your comment "A beautiful evocation of family." Thank you very much. This is my daughter's 27th birthday.

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  3. Yes a great family scene of a happy birthday.

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