thirteen little
duckies
on the pontoon
one little
ducky
jumped too soon
two little
duckies
flew far away
three
little duckies
knew not to play
four little
duckies
dived down deep
three little duckies
are tender fox meat

Ooh! That ending in particular makes me shudder. Nicely done – so ostensibly playful.
ReplyDeletehehe good one :)
ReplyDeleteEww. Yes, very creepy!
ReplyDeleteI love that you start with thirteen. Very cool.
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